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Thursday, September 13, 2007

Sunno.......

Sunno......
Ik kaam karna
Chaand sey kuch mitti lana
Phir us sey do but banana
Ik tum jaisa, ik mujh jaisa
Phir un dono ko torh dena
Phir ik baar
Usi mitti sey do but banana
Ik tum jaisa
Ik mujh jaisa
Taa ki
Tum men kuch kuch main reh jaun
Aur mujh men kuch kuch tum reh jao
posted by Reetika at 9/13/2007 02:10:00 PM

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Bahut hi sunder...aap apni kavitaon me apni poori feelings ko utar deti ho...."Sunno.....,Tukhdon me zindgi...." mere dil ko touch kar gaya....

September 16, 2007 1:09 PM  
Blogger Sirf Naam hi Kaafi Hai said...

'sunno....' is great imagination. it it truly touches you. pata nahin kya ho gaya tha jab padh raha tha. khatm hone ke baad bhi khoya hua tha shabon mein

September 28, 2007 10:55 PM  
Blogger Rukaiya said...

kya kaha jaye aapki is khubsurt imagination ke liye ......... itni sadgi se lafzon ko yun pirona ki dil se hotey hue ruh ko chhu jaye

bahut hi payaari lagi aapki nazam :)

November 30, 2007 12:04 AM  
Blogger Puja Upadhyay said...

WOW! amazing. the imagery is so beautiful...surreal. cheers!!!

December 10, 2008 12:59 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Simply beautifulllllllll

January 16, 2010 4:20 PM  

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