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Sunday, January 04, 2009

नजरिया अपना अपना....

पीले से आसमान का
बुझा हुआ चाँद....
या नीले सी तश्तरी में
चम् चमाता अक्स किसी का
नजरिया है अपना अपना
उस बात का ,
या इस बात का ..........
असर हो किस बात का
यह फ़ैसला है अपना अपना
posted by Reetika at 1/04/2009 11:57:00 PM

11 Comments:

चलिये आखिर आपने कविता पुरी कर ली। सच ही कहा है आपने कि "यह फ़ैसला है अपना अपना"। देखने वाले की नजर होती है।

January 05, 2009 3:13 AM  

shades of gulzar in your poetry.

keep it up.

January 05, 2009 4:07 PM  

@ Shashwat.. yea sort of completed it by hook or by crook. I hope it makes some sense...

@ Ashwini... may its because... I grewi up hearing / reading him a lot and an ardent admirer of his creations... waise taareef ka shukriya

January 05, 2009 8:27 PM  

very true... its all about perception and each one has a different one...

January 05, 2009 11:36 PM  

sahi hai...chand jaisi subjective cheez shayad duniya me nahin hai...jiska jaise man kare dekh leta hai, peela gulabi, neela...jaane kitne rang hai iske bhi, jindagi ki tarah. kavita khoobsoorat hai.

January 06, 2009 4:40 PM  

wow... u've put it in very nice words...
good going
:0)

January 06, 2009 6:03 PM  

बहुत ही ख़ूबसूरत नज़्म पेश की है आपने, वाह!

---मेरा पृष्ठ
चाँद, बादल और शाम

January 07, 2009 6:28 AM  

I couldnt agree more with "I Walk Alone"...and he knows why :)

January 07, 2009 7:52 AM  

आज ही देखा ब्लॉग आपका, काफी सुंदर कवितायें हैं। कुछ पढी है ज्यादातर बाकी हैं।

January 07, 2009 2:19 PM  

@ Shekhar (I Walk Alone) & Paradox Philip... nazriyon ka kya kehna... kuch log baag poochte hain ki aap kaise hain... hum kehte hain humto acche hi hain ..waqt ko accha hona chahiye....

@ Vinay, Kishore.. Thanks

@ Bilquis... so the credit for first two lines goes to you..undoubtedly.....

@ PoemsnPooja..... yeh mua chaand ho hai jo har roz kheese niporta ek naya hi nazariya paida kar deta hai zehan mein....

January 07, 2009 2:58 PM  

hi reetika

i like this poem very much---

November 24, 2009 3:39 PM  

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